Ayaz Ali _ Assignment 17
Assignment 17
1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?
2) I think other students gave me really good feedback on my original pitch, and the critiques they gave me were great. They explained how they liked my idea and enthusiasm, but maybe turning the fan off in the background would be less distracting, which is something I am definitely looking into changing. I did not think anyone gave me any silly reviews, as everything seemed legit and really helped me make a better pitch next time around.
3) I pretty much kept the same ideas and also turned off the fan and tried to take away from any distracting features in the background. I felt my original pitch was good and informative and also I think it got the point across in a great way.
1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?
2) I think other students gave me really good feedback on my original pitch, and the critiques they gave me were great. They explained how they liked my idea and enthusiasm, but maybe turning the fan off in the background would be less distracting, which is something I am definitely looking into changing. I did not think anyone gave me any silly reviews, as everything seemed legit and really helped me make a better pitch next time around.
3) I pretty much kept the same ideas and also turned off the fan and tried to take away from any distracting features in the background. I felt my original pitch was good and informative and also I think it got the point across in a great way.
Hey Ayaz,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with your pitch and using the feedback from last time to improve this time. You did a good job using your hands to deliver impact to what you were saying. I thought you also did a good job using your voice inflections to keep attention. I would recommend if you have to do a pitch in the future to come up with a question or statistic to open with that will capture interest right away.
Hey Ayaz,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with your pitch and using the feedback from last time to improve this time. You did a good job using your hands to deliver impact to what you were saying. I thought you also did a good job using your voice inflections to keep attention. I would recommend if you have to do a pitch in the future to come up with a question or statistic to open with that will capture interest right away.
Hey Ayaz,
ReplyDeleteGreat job! This pitch was much better and you defiantly fixed the comments that were made last time. I think that as we move forward you may want to talk a little more about the business. Right now you are focusing on the importance, which is it, but part of this class is selling us the business idea. So maybe try to talk about how you are going to market, or something like that.