Assignment 22
Assignment 22
1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?
2) I think this third pitch really helped me make the little changes I needed. I think there were not many issues from my last pitch, and I think this time everything went smooth. The fan obviously was an original issue, but now I think with that solved everything seemed to just be intact. The feedback was very helpful and I was happy to fix the issues that I may have not caught by myself.
3) I did not really change much at all honestly, and I think the feedback did not need me to change much. Being more excited was one thing, but they liked the usage of my hands and everything, so I just enjoyed giving the pitch this time. The feedback helped make me create an amazing pitch.
1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?
2) I think this third pitch really helped me make the little changes I needed. I think there were not many issues from my last pitch, and I think this time everything went smooth. The fan obviously was an original issue, but now I think with that solved everything seemed to just be intact. The feedback was very helpful and I was happy to fix the issues that I may have not caught by myself.
3) I did not really change much at all honestly, and I think the feedback did not need me to change much. Being more excited was one thing, but they liked the usage of my hands and everything, so I just enjoyed giving the pitch this time. The feedback helped make me create an amazing pitch.
He great idea ali, you talk very calm precise and slowly which makes it easy for the crowd to understand. Moreover, the idea itself makes sense. However I think that the implementation can become hard since you have to convince the school and parents that there is reason to implement such manners.
ReplyDeleteHey Ayaz,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this. You have definitely gotten better on each one of these. I think the idea is great and it sounded in this one as though you were targeting the client that would make this decision, principals and council members. My suggestion to you would be start the pitch off with an attention grabber. Maybe yell BANG at the start and say, did that scare you? Imagine if you were in a class room and heard that gun shot go off in the room next to you. What do you feel? As a parent hearing this is happening, are you afraid for your children? etc....